Monday, March 21, 2005

 

Website Update

Well, I got the homepage set up over the weekend. I plan to add at least 5 pages a week. I plan to make this a huge information site first, then, add monetization later.
Here you go:

Best Recumbent Touring Bicycles.


Please, tell me what you think.

Comments:
Looks great, well written. You hooked me as well as you possible could without pictures. Now where are the bikes?

I look forward to seeing the site unfold. :-)

-john
 
Not trying to be mean, just a tip...you have a few grammatical errors on there. I think I remember you saying you wanted to be a copy writer...you could use this new website as an example of your work to show prospective clients. One gets used to seeing what they have written and can easily miss the odd error. I would recommend having another set of eyes look it over before you publish. Otherwise, a great start. I'm looking forward to seeing the rest.

-Netcelt
 
Thanks, man. I'll do that.
 
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